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Weather Changes[written by Veloci-T]

Veloci-T

Registered Member
Song: Weather Changes
Genre: Rap/Hip Hop
Inspiration: Former Crush(lol)
Album: Tearaway(Pre-Release)
Veloci-T's First Song
Approximate Time Length: 3 minutes

WEATHER CHANGES, WRITTEN AND RAPPED BY VELOCI-T AKA DA FRUNTLYNE SOLJA, PRODUCED BY AFTERSHOCK RECORDS

Chorus x2

As the weather changes, we see a light in range
Heavy rains comes falling down, I feel like Im gonna drown
Reaching out to touch your face, you then disappear into thin air


Verse 1:

Reached out to touch your face now you leave
You made me feel like there is no love I can recieve
The weather changes and the lightning ranges
I dont know what to do, I thought you had knew
The Lightning strikes and the trees fall on us and forces us to crawl
We stand up and see a thousand comets flying down ready to make an Armaggedon flame
Just before the comets hit the atmosphere I turned around to my rear
I had one phrase to say, "I love you wit' all my heart", and we finally part
Tick Tock Seven Minutes on the clock

Chorus x2

3 Minutes later I realize I cant die without her
I run to her, hug her, tell her I miss her
We held on each other tightly
Kissed each other nicely
Tears ran down her face, her tears I traced
Tick tock, 2 minutes on the clock
"What are you cryin about, you got me..." I said
1 minute......30 seconds.....5...4...3...2...1...(crashing noises)

Chorus x4

Hook:

I wake up, I cant believe it, it was a dream, nothing had changed, but one thing HAD changed, and she is no longer in San Jose...she is in another city I dont intend to go to...I will never see her again

Chorus x6(vocal fade)



Ok, the song is finished, rate it out of 5 plz, and also, if you have any questions, i will answer them
 

Pugz

Ms. Malone
V.I.P.
Wow....that is like...wow. It's well written, it's rythmic, it's deep. You've got some talent there, keep it up ^_^
 
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dias2525

Guest
Hey now here's a song I like. I was hoping to see something from you I could really enjoy reading. I don't care much for rap but this has a lot of feelings poured into it. great job!
 
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Sorayoushi

Guest
I agree with Dias and Pugz. The song was rhythmic with strong words. Although it would be awesome if I could hear you actually rap it. That would be mad cool. Anyways, great job. I give you a 4.5.
 
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