The Lochness Monster By Danny Melnyk (me)

Smelnick

Creeping On You
V.I.P.
#1
I wrote this story in grade 5. As you can see, I also illustrated it myself.











------
also, you might notice that it's very hardy boys - esque
 
Last edited:

Bliss

Sally Twit
#2
Poor Mr Wiggel, he had a heart attack AND got run over.

I love the story and the pictures. Hahaha.

What happened next?
 

Tucker

Lion Rampant
#3
Poor Mr Wiggel, he had a heart attack AND got run over.
And he had gone insane and had curly red hair. A tragic character, if ever there was one! :lol:

This story shows amazing skill for a 5th-grader, Danny. I'd say that the average adult probably can't write dialogue that well. It does remind me of the Hardy Boys, too! A real shame, what happened to them...

 
Last edited:

Smelnick

Creeping On You
V.I.P.
#4
I was an avid hardy boys fan as a youth. I read tons too, which could account for the grade five writing prodigyness.
 

RJ-Cool

"Expect the unexpected"
#5
Are you sure you were only in 5th grade when you wrote this? Seriously...this is a great story...not to mention, the interesting illustrations........pretty cool!