The Lochness Monster By Danny Melnyk (me)

Discussion in 'The Bathroom Wall' started by Smelnick, Jun 12, 2010.

  1. Smelnick

    Smelnick Creeping On You V.I.P.

    I wrote this story in grade 5. As you can see, I also illustrated it myself.

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    also, you might notice that it's very hardy boys - esque
     
    Last edited: Jun 12, 2010

  2. Bliss

    Bliss Sally Twit

    Poor Mr Wiggel, he had a heart attack AND got run over.

    I love the story and the pictures. Hahaha.

    What happened next?
     
  3. Tucker

    Tucker Lion Rampant

    And he had gone insane and had curly red hair. A tragic character, if ever there was one! :lol:

    This story shows amazing skill for a 5th-grader, Danny. I'd say that the average adult probably can't write dialogue that well. It does remind me of the Hardy Boys, too! A real shame, what happened to them...

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    Last edited: Jun 13, 2010
  4. Smelnick

    Smelnick Creeping On You V.I.P.

    I was an avid hardy boys fan as a youth. I read tons too, which could account for the grade five writing prodigyness.
     
  5. RJ-Cool

    RJ-Cool "Expect the unexpected"

    Are you sure you were only in 5th grade when you wrote this? Seriously...this is a great story...not to mention, the interesting illustrations........pretty cool!
     
  6. Bliss

    Bliss Sally Twit

    He wrote it last week. He's just embarrassed by his pictures.
     
  7. Tucker

    Tucker Lion Rampant

    Name your price - I must have this painting!

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  8. RJ-Cool

    RJ-Cool "Expect the unexpected"

    Bliss, I believe you! For a kid the pictures would be cool, but for a grown a** man.........the pictures........ammm.......not sooo...........good! :lol:
     
  9. Bliss

    Bliss Sally Twit

    Is that Hitler on the left?
     
  10. Rebeccaaa

    Rebeccaaa yellow 4!

    LOL.

    I love that you were excited because you'd heard there was good scenery.
     

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