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The Last Walk

Scissorhands

Registered Member
New piece on piano. =)

Let me know what you think. I know it's short, but it's hella hard coming up with this shit! Constructive criticism? (Also, I figured it would be better to post in the musicians lounge than in entertainment.)
 

Bliss

Sally Twit
Very good, Scissors. Seems the practising has been paying off.

And I am glad you didn't add anything to that. It works perfectly fine without anything in the background.

The only thing I didn't like was that it didn't have an ending. It just got cut off. I know it was no doubt purposely done that way. But it would have been nice if it went in to a soft ending.
 
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Scissorhands

Registered Member
I suck at form. So yeah, I didn't know how to end it. There was a little bit left after that, but I cut it off. Maybe I'll get better at that one day. Now I'm just working on writing. Thank you, Bliss. =)
 

Smelnick

Creeping On You
V.I.P.
Ending a song is hard. I think you didn't end it that bad. I loved it. it sounded it really good.
 
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