Smile - Contest Entry

[SuiGeneris]

Yeah gonna post another..I'm really bored...

Smile​

I looked over my shoulder today,
and saw a smiling face in my way,
it scared me; so I looked away
When I saw a smiling face today

People say its a rarity
for a face to be smiling back at me,
To others I'm not too great to see
thats why people say its a rarity.

Everyone seems to walk right by,
No one ever stops; No one says Hi
Our lives are just to busy to ask why,
Why everyone seems to just walk right by.

Maybe if I lok again;
I'll see my wonderful smiling friend;
I might even learn to smile in the end,
If I take a chance and look again.

But what if my friend is gone,
What if I'm left all alone,
Wondering what I did wrong,
Wondering why my friend is gone,



I looked over my shoulder today
and saw another blank face in the way,
thats why I decided I had to get away,
When I looked over my shoulder today

It was then I saw my friend was gone,
No one was there; I guess I was wrong
I've beared this pain for far too long,
All because my friend was gone.


I wonder if I'll ever smile again,
now that I've lost my only friend,
I guess my time has come to an end
I know I'll never smile again.

 

[dias2525]

Re: Smile

That's kinda sad.. but hey it was full of emotion and well written it had a good turning point and the climax was good. I hope to see more of your work.

 

[Sorayoushi]

Re: Smile

I agree with Dias. It was a sad poem, that made me cry a bit. Yes, it was full of emotion. Once again, great job.

 

[SuiGeneris]

*bumping for contest*

 

[See_Me_Fly]

whoops i forgot to congratulate you on another well-written poem!
it is really sad though about how that guy will never smile again...

 

[SuiGeneris]

whoops i forgot to congratulate you on another well-written poem!
it is really sad though about how that guy will never smile again...

Thanks! Yeah I know its kind've sad, but I really like the emotion in this poem, I think it's one of my better poems. who knows.

Anyways thanks all for the votes!