Post 9-11 Ode to the USA

Discussion in 'Art & Creative' started by Impaired, Dec 1, 2006.

  1. Impaired

    Impaired Guest

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    I wrote this shortly after 9-11. . .
     

  2. Kazmarov

    Kazmarov For a Free Scotland

    I wasn't wild about how the rhythm and rhyme scheme went together (at least how I read it), but it's thoughtful and I liked the use of non-canon patriotic language.
     
  3. Vidic15

    Vidic15 No Custom Title Exists V.I.P. Lifetime

    The rhytm scheme is good, i like it..

    I feel like it's full of confidency

    +rep given
     

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