Discussion in 'Art & Creative' started by Impaired, Dec 1, 2006.
I wrote this shortly after 9-11. . .
I wasn't wild about how the rhythm and rhyme scheme went together (at least how I read it), but it's thoughtful and I liked the use of non-canon patriotic language.
The rhytm scheme is good, i like it..
I feel like it's full of confidency
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