Poorly written ....

#1
Although the story itself is nothing new, the quality of the writing left me wondering who the heck proof reads this stuff before it's posted?
It's not the first time I've noticed ridiculous mistakes while reading news articels online.
See if you can find the flaws.



POSTED: 6:28 pm CST February 18, 2010
UPDATED: 8:26 pm CST February 18, 2010
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OKLAHOMA CITY -- Police have released new details about a woman accused of coming to Oklahoma to have a sexual relationship with a teenager she met while playing a video game.

The 14-year-old boy's mother woke up last week and found that her son was gone. Police said he was with Annamay Alexander, 43.

According to court documents, when the boy returned to his home, Alexander came along. The documents said she told the boy's mother she was there to talk about him marrying her daughter.

The mother said she later found text messages from the woman to her son that said, "My body is yours to do whatever you want with," and "I love you and we are going to get married."



KOCO


Detectives said the boy's video game system had a picture of Alexander in her underwear.

Investigators said the two men in a virtual reality world called Sony Home, where players create characters of themselves.

The mother also found notes where Alexander called herself the 14-year-old's wife. Police said Alexander is already married and lives in Florida with three children.

The boy told his mother that Alexander came to Oklahoma City to have a sexual relationship with him.

Alexander remains at large and police are looking for her. They said she was driving a white 2003 Dodge Intrepid with Florida tags. They asked anyone who saw her to call 911 immediately.
And, just to be sure they get the proper credit..

Police: Alexander Sent Sexy Texts - Oklahoma City News Story - KOCO Oklahoma City

Oh, feel free to discuss the nasty mom. (who by the way looks well over the age of 43) Not only is her attraction to a child disgusting, but what was this kid thinking when he agreed to this even after seeing her picture?
 

LifeinthePond

Mark ov teh Pond
#2
Oh, feel free to discuss the nasty mom. (who by the way looks well over the age of 43) Not only is her attraction to a child disgusting, but what was this kid thinking when he agreed to this even after seeing her picture?
Ha ha ha, I agree, although I hope you're not implying it would be OK if she were extremely attractive.

I don't know what's going on with the world. This article reminds me of a RL friend I know whose wife left him for someone in her online guild from WoW. Just up and drove several states away to be with someone she flirted with on Ventrilo. Oh yeah, the guy was also married. That was two ruined marriages over one internet gaming romance.
 

DinoFlintstone

"There can be only one!"
#3
I think what goes on-line is not subject to the same editing for it to go to print. It's expressive and irreversible to try to correct what has already been printed.

That aside, this woman is disgusting, and she 'looks' as though she's well aged through drink. She looks like a young 50 or 60 year old, but she does not look like she's in her 40's.
 

Smelnick

Creeping On You
V.I.P.
#4
The two men.... Typo! Yah I have to agree. That's beyond gross and disturbing. What was going through the kids head?
 

EllyDicious

made of AMBIGUITY
V.I.P.
#6
Well....considering he's a teenager, I guess it's [i'm not saying normal] not that abnormal to fantasize about older women up to the point of thinking to marry them...
A teenager's mind flows everywhere ...it's about the strange way he sees the world, including women.

Disturbing is the fact that this sick-head woman wanted to marry this 14 year old.
 
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DinoFlintstone

"There can be only one!"
#8
Well....considering he's a teenager, I guess it's [i'm not saying normal] not that abnormal to fantasize about older women up to the point of thinking to marry them...
A teenager's mind flows everywhere ...it's about the strange way he sees the world, including women.

Disturbing is the fact that this sick-head woman wanted to marry this 14 year old.

I doubt she really wanted to marry him, especially since she was already married. I'm guessing she was just acting out on a sexual fantasy.
 

EllyDicious

made of AMBIGUITY
V.I.P.
#9
I doubt she really wanted to marry him, especially since she was already married. I'm guessing she was just acting out on a sexual fantasy.
Yeah it could be. That's why I said sick-head because it's not about love, it's about having a sick sexual fantasy which is quite abnormal for a 43 y.o woman to feel it for a 14 y.o teen.
On the other hand a sexual fantasy of 14 y.o teen for a 43 y.o woman may not be that abnormal ....
 

oxyMORON

A Darker Knight
#10
Well....considering he's a teenager, I guess it's [i'm not saying normal] not that abnormal to fantasize about older women up to the point of thinking to marry them...
A teenager's mind flows everywhere ...it's about the strange way he sees the world, including women.

Disturbing is the fact that this sick-head woman wanted to marry this 14 year old.
Also because guys, especially teenage guys are generally really horny and the fact that there's a woman who wants or pretends to want to have sex with him can be a very tempting prospect.