Nos' Second Attempt at Anime

Nosferatu_Alucard

Undead Intellectual
#1
I based this drawing off of the character Mikuru Asahina from the anime, The Melancholy of Haruihi Suzumiya. I think overall, it's ok, but it didn't come out looking like Mikuru. I thought I had the hair color down, but I messed it up, and I don't think the eyes came out well.

Well, I'll take any comments or complaints. If you love it, rep me, if you don't blow me.

Mikuru:
1:
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/7540/p1220192ab8.jpg
2: http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2082/p1220194bw9.jpg
 

Iris

rainbow 11!
#3
It's pretty good. But right now try to focus on your drawing, not coloring. Drawing and shading should be your primary target. It's like trying to run before you can walk. ^^

Just focus on those two things and once it starts to become easier, add some color and start to ink them in.
 

oxyMORON

A Darker Knight
#4
I like it. I like to try to copy other pictures rather than drawing originals myself. Sometimes when your pic gets a little off (as I'm sure you've noticed) you can sort of improvise and add stuff to make it look normal again.

and I would rep you, but it says I have to spread some around first :D