My Poem: Escape.

Shaggy

Registered Member
#1
I wrote this after thinking of something i said in another thread: Music is my escape, i'd crumble without it

Escape:

Music is an escape
It paves a cushioned track
One of peace and retrospect
The sound of a chorus
Makes me wish
To leave here and be with it

My stress and hates are gone
In this world
Free from from spite and scorn
I wish you were here
My Brothers in arms
Escape with me
Free from hatred and harm

So i beg you my friends
Leave your worries and your troubles
Come join me
In this world we fear no others

So lose yourself in script and sound
Become what you are
But above all else remember
We have to go back to the start

What do you think?
Thoughts? Critiques? Anything?...
 

greyham_G

Registered Member
#5
I would gladly leave my worries and troubles and join you :D

awesome poem, inspired me to start writing my own!

keep em coming man.