My Poem: Escape.

Discussion in 'Books & Comics' started by Shaggy, Apr 23, 2009.

  1. Shaggy

    Shaggy Registered Member

    I wrote this after thinking of something i said in another thread: Music is my escape, i'd crumble without it

    Escape:

    Music is an escape
    It paves a cushioned track
    One of peace and retrospect
    The sound of a chorus
    Makes me wish
    To leave here and be with it

    My stress and hates are gone
    In this world
    Free from from spite and scorn
    I wish you were here
    My Brothers in arms
    Escape with me
    Free from hatred and harm

    So i beg you my friends
    Leave your worries and your troubles
    Come join me
    In this world we fear no others

    So lose yourself in script and sound
    Become what you are
    But above all else remember
    We have to go back to the start

    What do you think?
    Thoughts? Critiques? Anything?...
     
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  2. Mexican

    Mexican Registered Member

    Awesome! I feel a connection with your poem.

    Please post some more soon!

    Great job, Shaggy.
     
  3. CaptainObvious

    CaptainObvious Son of Liberty V.I.P.

    Very cool, Shaggy, I liked it.
     
  4. Shaggy

    Shaggy Registered Member

    Cheers guys! I'll see what other material ive got lying around.
     
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  5. greyham_G

    greyham_G Registered Member

    I would gladly leave my worries and troubles and join you :D

    awesome poem, inspired me to start writing my own!

    keep em coming man.
     
  6. thewrongaddiction

    thewrongaddiction New Member

    I liked it. It made me think, not about anything in particular but about everything. Well Done xD
     
  7. KarlW

    KarlW Registered Member

    I think it is quite good. I really like it.
     

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