My 3 poems (Comments appreciated)


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I wirte, I kind of soothes me. I'll put a few in this post, tell me if you like them and i'll post more.

They are quite long, but good to read. Any criticisms welcome.


Plastic Smiles.

The crows encircle me,
As i walk through this wasteland,
A can of Hope in one hand
A lace of freedom in the other.
When i was 4 you gave me this locket,
Inside a picture full of fake smiles,
Fake beleifs, Fake hope, Fake trust,
Smiles so cold, So bitter,
"Just look at this picture and we'll be there"
That means nothing now!
Were are you when i need you most?
I have been alone for so long,
No sign of Beleif, hope or trust!
But it doesn't matter now,
This Can of hope will bring us together,
This lace of freedom will make sure you stay-
For the show.
Your fake masqeurade fooled nobody,
You were to busy chasing your fix,
To notice the halo above my head,
I needed you, You obviousley thought different.
The fake smiles on your face my me sick,
So Plastic, so fake,
I would know, I spent my life-
Hiding behing Fake smiles,
Reasurring you everything was okay,
I was dying inside...
I was on the streets at 7-on my own
Where was my mother?
Oh-that's right you were getting
Drunk off your ****.and screwing
Heroin needles until your arms were black and blue
This kerosene will handle all the memories
Every single stomach churning-acid-
Burning-turning, sizzling thought
That leads straight back to both of you
I was eating out of garbage cans at 9
Where was my father?
Oh-that's right you were teaching me
How to sell ecstasy in alleyways and
How to run from cops and
Drugs 101-the very foundation-
The basics of snorting cocaine-
And the best way to get your high.
I want nothing left to do with you,
I leave every trace of me behind,
Covering them in thihs can of Hope,
This can of kerosene,
Every picture, Every Fake smile-
Every Lie, Every Deception,
Every ****ing wide eyed promise!
Not once,
Did you say "I love you" and mean it,
Forget all those Goodnight kisses,
Forget all the hugs you gave me when i hurt myself,
You never even noticed the scars on my arms,
3 years it went on,
I just liked the feeling of tearing myself open,
Leaving traces of myself behind,
For other people to see.
But thats all over now,
Thiis kerosene will see me to the end,
See us to the end,
Gave a chance, you could have stopped me.
Through It all,
I always did love you....
Good night.

No name

Take me away from this nghtmare
Give me Spira or Russia
Make my video game life come true
Take me away from this nightmare
Because i would give anything...Anything
Just to be you.

Given the fact that change is for the better,
I embrace for the worst,
Living my life behind curtains of false belief,
I hold my anger behing the walls of terror.
That you have brought upon my fragile heart,
Hiding behind the honest truth,
You never saw that my heart was falling at your feet.
Hold Me, Love Me,
Thats all I ask,

You left me... (favourate)

I sit in the corner,
in complete darkness,
clutching that note,
"I'll be home before you know it"
Yer right,
I almost believed you,
Until the booze, the drugs and the sex,
It all got to your head,
Whatever happened to me?
Am i your faded memory?
I cry myself to sleep every night,
All in false hope,
It's my own fault really,
I know you're not coming back,
"I'll be home before you know it"
The words echo in my mind,
I must have read them over a thousand times,
My trust in you was stronger than my trust in me,
You were my rock at hard times,
But it doesn't matter now,
The gun in my hand can solve these problems,
These fears...

My heart bleeds for you,
Physical pain is my thought of you,
What are you doing to yourself,
"Just one more, give me one more"
I remeber the day i hid your stash,
And i will never forget it,
The 6-inch scar you left on my arm,
This pain...
The doctor asked me how i got it y'know,
It took all the love i had to lie for you,
Even with all the addiction and violence,
I couldn't have lived without you there,
But it doesn't matter now,
I have the bottle to take my fear,
And this gun to take my emotion,
Your emotion...

"I'll be home before you know it"
If this statement ever lives up to it's name,
I hope you have forgot about me,
Saying that you probably already have,
Just to let you know,
I love you,
you always were the best,
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