Discussion in 'Art & Creative' started by Herr Gestalt, Aug 27, 2006.

  1. Herr Gestalt

    Herr Gestalt Guest

    Two short musings; not necesarilly the height of literary genius, but things on my mind in a simple way to express them. Hope anyone else gets the same idea.
    Note: Criticism would normally be welcome, but this is just sharing. Thanks!

    I once saw a floating
    I was surprised

    I didn't know

    was the water carrying the log
    or was

    the log
    floating on the water



    I was thinking
    about this, the other day;
    you can have water
    so hot
    that you can drop ice cubes in it
    (to cool it down)
    And watch them disappear
    by melt
    Until nothing is left but dream.

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