"Little Brightness"

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dias2525

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#1
Ok this is a poem that was written with Matt and TK in mind. Matt is writing about his little brother. The two brothers are off digimon if you didn't know.

Little Brightness

There you are
a younger version of me
am I trying to correct the mistakes I made
or am I saving you from the consequences
I believe I'm only here to protect you
I feel I must guide you to the way
I try to fight away the dark as your strength
In truth you are mine and I collapse without you
My jealousy raises as others are with you
But our bond goes much deeper than our blood
I try to take care of you
Yet I know you can care for yourself
Fears growthat I may become not needed and fade out
I see you as a child but I'm the one acting childish
I try to be the best brother to you
And not fail you or betray you
My love for you is something that can't be undone
Friends or foes we will be there for each other
For you are my brother I shall not leave you
 

Pugz

Ms. Malone
V.I.P.
#2
Aww brotherly love ^__^ if only all older brothers were that dedicated.

Anyways! Very well written and very deep and emotional. Good work.
 
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Sorayoushi

Guest
#3
That's sweet and meaningful. Yes, a brotherly bond. I can feel the rhythm and it was steady. Good job.
 
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See_Me_Fly

Guest
#4
Really nice...very sweet and...uh...nice. oh and did i say it was very sweet? You write very good poems, with strong feeling and descriptive language