Hold me, baby


Certified Shitlord
Just a quick poem I wrote the other week. I was in a really gloomy mood, so I'm sure it shows.


Hold me baby
Only lonely
A house before me
The windows misshapen cruelly

Dimmed vision through clouded glass
I wonder how long I'll last
For fractured legs and demon's breath to pass

Drink me hollow
Icy white to follow

I'm done


Nefarious Kaizoku Capt'n
I like it, it's something I haven't heard before or anything that's like it, Write more!^^; Geez that poem gave me a cold chill down my spine too >>; The one thing I liked was how one thing went with another to describe the scene/vision u wanted ppl to see Merc.