Goodbye Forever

[FaKeD]

Just thought i would post a poem I read the other day


A hand full of lies
A heart full of pain
A lot of memories
burn in my brain

An eye full of tears
A mouth without voice
A life without you
that is my choice

My screams can't be heard
A smile can't be found
You won't see my face
Cause I'm not around

You had me once
but never again
Goodbye forever
this is the end


Does anybody else think this poem is amazing? :-o

 

[Mirage]

Not bad. Did you just break up with a girlfriend before you wrote that?

 

[FaKeD]

Nah... xD it wasn't me who wrote it Andrew... x)

I saw it on a web page and decided i should put here.. =)
The author signed as anonymous so i can't give credit to whoever wrote it.. =/

 

[Teorropy]

Man, that is pretty intense. Makes me miss my wife and she hasn't left me. Wow.

 

[FaKeD]

I guess i'm not the only one that likes it... XD

 

[CaliforniaSteve]

Eh, its not bad. It would have more meaning If I knew why the person wrote it.

 

[FaKeD]

I think it's not too hard to guess why they wrote this.. xD

like Andrew said the person who wrote this must have broken up recently with his/her girlfriend/boyfriend.

 

[CaliforniaSteve]

Eh, perhaps. I just know people that write like that for the sake of writing.

 

[Iris]

Wow... That is really good... Kudos to whoever wrote it...

 

[dDave]

Good poem, who wrote it?


At first when I saw the thread title I thought that you were saying that you were going to leave the forum.