Goodbye Forever

Discussion in 'Books & Comics' started by FaKeD, Nov 11, 2007.

  1. FaKeD

    FaKeD Registered Member

    Just thought i would post a poem I read the other day :)


    A hand full of lies
    A heart full of pain
    A lot of memories
    burn in my brain

    An eye full of tears
    A mouth without voice
    A life without you
    that is my choice

    My screams can't be heard
    A smile can't be found
    You won't see my face
    Cause I'm not around

    You had me once
    but never again
    Goodbye forever
    this is the end


    Does anybody else think this poem is amazing? :-o
     
    Last edited: Nov 11, 2007

  2. Mirage

    Mirage Administrator Staff Member V.I.P.

    Not bad. Did you just break up with a girlfriend before you wrote that?
     
  3. FaKeD

    FaKeD Registered Member

    Nah... xD it wasn't me who wrote it Andrew... x)

    I saw it on a web page and decided i should put here.. =)
    The author signed as anonymous so i can't give credit to whoever wrote it.. =/
     
  4. Teorropy

    Teorropy Registered User

    Man, that is pretty intense. Makes me miss my wife and she hasn't left me. Wow.
     
  5. FaKeD

    FaKeD Registered Member

    I guess i'm not the only one that likes it... XD
     
  6. CaliforniaSteve

    CaliforniaSteve Registered Member

    Eh, its not bad. It would have more meaning If I knew why the person wrote it.
     
  7. FaKeD

    FaKeD Registered Member

    I think it's not too hard to guess why they wrote this.. xD

    like Andrew said the person who wrote this must have broken up recently with his/her girlfriend/boyfriend.
     
  8. CaliforniaSteve

    CaliforniaSteve Registered Member

    Eh, perhaps. I just know people that write like that for the sake of writing.
     
  9. Iris

    Iris rainbow 11!

    Wow... That is really good... Kudos to whoever wrote it...
     
  10. dDave

    dDave Guardian of the Light V.I.P.

    Good poem, who wrote it?


    At first when I saw the thread title I thought that you were saying that you were going to leave the forum.
     

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