Wow interesting. Rofl, well your does look good but, I think the fact that you had Ghostriders Black cycle in it thru it off alittle. I think it looks pretty cool though. I also feel the render you used was a little bit too big.
It was either that one or the Spade one from PR and the spade one was alittle too small and if you overlay the last render then it would have been too dark and looked way ugly >.> I could of made the render smaller but I didn't want to because I wanted a big effect. I don't know what I'm going to do with that sig though either which sucks >.<