Five Seven Five

Smelnick

Creeping On You
V.I.P.
#1
round and round the tree
swings this love you have for me
I dagger your heart

bleeding and dying
soft, subtle penetration
you will never feel

come now, one and all
join me in this haiku fun
let us poetry
 
#2
smel are you on drugs
or have you just gone crazy
haikus limit me.
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oh and one more thing
is it just me who does this
counting on your fing........ oh shit. i screwed that up
 
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Smelnick

Creeping On You
V.I.P.
#4
actually yes
I do count on my fingers
all my syllables

I find haikus fun
the limit makes a challenge
diction helps alot