Five Seven Five

Discussion in 'The Bathroom Wall' started by Smelnick, Mar 21, 2009.

  1. Smelnick

    Smelnick Creeping On You V.I.P.

    round and round the tree
    swings this love you have for me
    I dagger your heart

    bleeding and dying
    soft, subtle penetration
    you will never feel

    come now, one and all
    join me in this haiku fun
    let us poetry
     

  2. Rebeccaaa

    Rebeccaaa yellow 4!

    smel are you on drugs
    or have you just gone crazy
    haikus limit me.
    ------
    oh and one more thing
    is it just me who does this
    counting on your fing........ oh shit. i screwed that up
     
    Last edited: Mar 21, 2009
  3. English-Emo-Boy

    English-Emo-Boy Supreme System Lord V.I.P. Lifetime

  4. Smelnick

    Smelnick Creeping On You V.I.P.

    actually yes
    I do count on my fingers
    all my syllables

    I find haikus fun
    the limit makes a challenge
    diction helps alot
     
  5. PretzelCorps

    PretzelCorps Registered Member

    Dude, haikus are great...
    But this looks looks awkwardly like
    necrophilia...

    :shifteyes::lol:
     
    Last edited: Mar 21, 2009
  6. Bliss

    Bliss Sally Twit

    I put my hamster in his ball for a bit and then put him back in the cage. I shut the cage door and he went to bed.
     
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  7. Smelnick

    Smelnick Creeping On You V.I.P.

    failure you are bliss
    that was hardly a haiku
    try again later
     
  8. Kazmarov

    Kazmarov For a Free Scotland

    bow chikka wow wow
    cheap synthesizer music
    I fuck bitches, yeah
     
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  9. ExpectantlyIronic

    ExpectantlyIronic e̳̳̺͕ͬ̓̑̂ͮͦͣ͒͒h̙ͦ̔͂?̅̂ ̾͗̑

    I think I'm doing it wrong?
     
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  10. Kazmarov

    Kazmarov For a Free Scotland

    oy, listening to
    the band Nickelback makes me
    pillage Canada
     

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