an ode to those dramatic people out there

#1
former me included heh this is a poem i wrote after i vented in that blog i just wrote! this is called being a 20 year old.... read it.... AFTER you read this :D

I am really tired of people starting shit.
trying to act like they know everything
can't you tell people see through the fakeness?
and you think you look cool fighting with me
but get with the ghandi, nothings cooler then peace

and when you turn people on me
it should tell you how quickly it could switch
and then when people realize you're a bitch
they'll turn on you too, like they did to me
and you're gonna learn what a true friend is

the person who loves you even when you mess up
and the person who trusts themselves to decide
so those people who flip and follow your lies
they'll turn on you too when the time arises
and if thats the only friends that i could find

i dont mind having my thoughts and this paper and pen
because that shit is unbias until the end
and whatever i say can speak for itself
not trying to fight some person for
well nothing except that i dont like their ways

but really who cares what they say or do?
i know myself, i know i'm true
to how i was raised and what i believe
about being equal, love and peace
you may think i'm sounding pretty hippie

and maybe thats out of style but since when
is caring and loyalty, trust and love
something we all can't strive for?
if you cant handle being an adult
at least let me be so i can achieve what you can not
 

velvety_blossom

Registered Member
#3
but really who cares what they say or do?
i know myself, i know i'm true
to how i was raised and what i believe
about being equal, love and peace

wow I like this part sooooooo much ..!
dunno what's the story behind this poem but I read it and I loved these lines ^^
 
#4
thanks so much. some people don't get my poetry cause i don't rhyme a lot and have a very distinct rhythm in my head that i don't know if it translates when you read it.

did any of you have problems catching the rhythm?
 
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